What do y'all think of my Doom video?

[TheRevenant212]

I worked real hard on it and think it turned out pretty good! Lemme know what you guys think! I'd like some honest feedback so I can apply it to my future work!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rZGzQ-cXquM&t=12s

[Ludi]

The use of papyrus font for your title cards is certainly a curious decision, haha

 

Your voice sounds really muffled, probably as a result of your mic. I think you have something pretty interesting here tho, might just need more practice :^)

[TheRevenant212]

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated! Yea, this was the first time I had done voice-over for one of my vids. And since I was recording off of my ipad, it definitely sounds pretty muffled. Hope it wasn't too distracting tho! 

I honestly can't remember why I went for Papyrus as my font lol

[MathsDevil]

Getting a decent microphone doesn't need to cost very much, but better audio quality is the main thing that would make you seem less of a noob at making videos. My first video makes me cringe when I look back, so don't give up!

 

[TheRevenant212]

Thanks for the encouragement. I've been looking into getting a mic!