Doom Short Story: Doom: The Hangar

[DoomerCheems]

Hemlo everyone, I decided to do something different with my writing and make a Doom short story! I narrated it, making reference to the gameplay itself, with a little bit of deviation for the sake of realism.

 

Enjoy! and tell me what you think.

Link: https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3371838/1/Doom-The-Hangar

Edited May 31 by DoomerCheems

[DoomGater]

Very colourful writing. But don't haste. it's very exciting to publish something and I realise that you can't wait for it, but this one

needs some reworking. Too many errors and occasionally too many filler words that don't do the text any good. But anyway,
I like it. it has flair, charm  and is written with the right amount of wits. Keep up the good work!

 

[DoomerCheems]

8 hours ago, DoomGater said:

Very colourful writing. But don't haste. it's very exciting to publish something and I realise that you can't wait for it, but this one

needs some reworking. Too many errors and occasionally too many filler words that don't do the text any good. But anyway,
I like it. it has flair, charm  and is written with the right amount of wits. Keep up the good work!

 

Thamks! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Yes I’m still working on mastering the mechanics. Writing made me realize how easy it is to lose track of punctuation, grammar and correct word usage. I appreciate you noticing the wit in it because I was going for that.