zzdevelin Posted July 21, 2003 Okay im working on a new story DEATH here is chapter 1 Chapter 1 coming of the storm John: Damn look at that wind man! Jack: Yeah fuck it looks a big storm is coming John: Fuck this shit! *Meanwhile at the beach* Lifeguard: Evacuate quick quick get the hell out of here! *Everybody runs* *In space* *From a satelite* Astronaut 1: Damn look at that typhoon! Astronaut 2: Its just a cyclone! A1: No look at the storm clouds! *A2 looks down* A2: Holy Shit! A1: The ... the clouds are red! blood red i say! *BLAM!* A1&A2: ARGH! *The satelite explodes in flames* *From somewhere* ?:ROAR! *In the storm* People: AH! *SLASH!* Someguy: What was that? Otherguy: Blood! ?:ROAR! *Slash slash!* *In apartment* Man: Holy Motherfucking shit! Baron of hell: ROAR! Jack: Hands u- Damn it WTF! John: Damn! Baron: Roar! *BLAM BLAM BLAM BLAM!* Jack: That thing just aint goin down! Baron: *SLASH* Man: Oof! *Dies* *SLAM!* Baron: AAARRRRGGGGGGHHHHHH! John: WTF did you did? Jack: Used a big ol pipe! Baron:........... *In the storm* ?: ROAR! LETS MOVE ON! *The Storm moves faster* ?: TIME FOR THE APOCALYPSE!!! To be countinued... what do yo tink? 0 Quote Share this post Link to post
Silverwyvern Posted July 21, 2003 It was like a story had a seizure. Interesting but feels kinda thrown together. 0 Quote Share this post Link to post
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.