My first poem. Read and respond please:
DEER MEMORIES
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As I wander a darkened Deimos hall
A light upon my memory cast
Indulge did I in fond recall
Of Father and a hunting trip past
A boy of four feet tip-toed stood
Never having held a gun
My Father, the Nebrasken wood
His double-shooter, truck and Son
We searched amongst the clawing pines
'Til Moon grew full and eyes grew tired