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Heh, that was curiously enjoyable.


I've got one piece of really anal nitpicking though:-

He made a b-line through the hallway entrance and straight down the passageway.

It's "beeline", not "b-line". ;-)

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DoomUK said:

Heh, that was curiously enjoyable.


I've got one piece of really anal nitpicking though:-

It's "beeline", not "b-line". ;-)

Whoops! The funny thing is that I knew that. Fixed.

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