This poem is disgusting and I regret ever writing it.

[129thVisplane]

Spoiler

Not too long ago I had a dream in which I wrote a poem about getting it on with a mancubus. I don't quite know what prompted me to actually write it in real life -- probably my current lack of sleep --, but here it is I guess. Sorry not sorry.

Oh, and it's NSFW if you've been wondering.

As I enter the darkened room,
what I see is sure to spell my doom;
a mass of flesh, and blood, and blubber
wallows on the floor -- it makes me shudder.
With arms of metal that spit fire at will,
I'm sure this beast wants nothing but to kill.
I raise my gun, my arms shaking in fear,
as I walk closer, drawing ever so near
to this demonic, gluttonous spawn
that dared to tread on the UAC's lawn
and now ain't gonna see the light of dawn.

The beast's eyes open, and it looks at me,
its eyes the brightest green I'd ever hoped to see.
Its stare is filled with something strange;
it's slowly causing my mind to change.
I can't kill this monster! Too hot to die.
--Wait, what the fuck, I shake my head, why?
How dare I think of such messed up shit?
This fatso ain't hot, it's gross, it's... it...
My fingers, they tremble. I drop my gun.
Part of me wants to turn and run.
But the part that's stronger, it wants some fun.

I take off my helmet, my armor, my pants,
eager to give the beast a little lapdance.
It drinks in my features with a thirsty gaze.
My mind's getting clouded with some kind of haze...
I straddle the monster, my panties wet;
its rolls of fat are slick with sweat,
it feels almost slimy, much like a slug.
Despite all that, I give the beast a hug.
I lean into a messy, bloodied kiss,
my body ready for pleasure and bliss.
I'm pretty sure I will be regretting this...

The fat underneath the beast's slimy skin ripples
as my palms gently rub its three sets of nipples.
I reach one hand down, to grasp its cock;
it's big, fat and thick and hard as a rock.
The monster's deep green eyes are full of lust
as I sit down on it and begin to thrust.
Suddenly, the beast reaches out and tries to bite;
its sudden hostility does not feel right...
I realize as its mouth opens a little bit more --
the beast does not want just sex -- it prefers vore!
[Next scene removed due to excessive gore.]

[Jaxxoon R]

If you regret it, why did you feel the need to share it?

[RaphaelMode]

Jaxxoon R said:

If you regret it, why did you feel the need to share it?

You of all people should know it. Or maybe not. Anyway, you do have experiences with counterculture and how most of the counterculture creators have to say "I am aware of the fact that counterculture sucks, and that I too suck as an author of counterculture! I am sharing it for the sake of humour, because retarded counterculture is so stupid it's funny!", or the evil egregore living in their heads will be very angry at them.

Speaking of the poem, it's absolutely fantastic, 7/10. I wish I would finish my own fanfiction, but I'm hopelessly stuck at 66% progress.

[Zulk RS]

*claps slowly*

Spoiler

I can't resist this urge to link this thread:
https://www.doomworld.com/vb/creative-works/73912-into-the-fold-mancubus-encounter/

[Jaxxoon R]

Ah I see. Maybe I should finish my derpy id Deathmatch X-Treme story I started a few years back.

[Billy Baron]

You used the word 'doom'. That counts for something, right?

[Cupboard]

Sexy fanfic. So how many nipples does to mancubus have? 2 is the obvious answer but 6 is supported by flabby artistic evidence.

[Tritnew]

I think It needed "Mancubus Is Love, Mancubus Is Life" to complete It, but I rate It 10/10 Mancubus nipples.

[Marnetmar]

Tritnew said:

I think It needed "Mancubus Is Love, Mancubus Is Life" to complete It, but I rate It 10/10 Mancubus nipples.

NO. WE ARE NOT GOING THERE.

[Cupboard]

^ This is my swamp

[Tritnew]

TheCupboard said:

^ This is my swamp

*This Is my Hellhole.

[Cupboard]

How many layers do you possess, my precious onion?

[Prologue-9]

This is actually pretty well written, especially liked the way the last 3 lines went together.

[Job]

Mancubus: A Doomed Senryū

Lovely Mancubus
My moral fiber weakens
I will have my way

[Obsidian]

The Cacodemon
Is the most lovely Hellspawn
But sucks at blowjobs

Dedicated to Fraggle.

[RaphaelMode]

Are we now going to post doom porn hikikomori?

[Tritnew]

RaphaelMode said:

Are we now going to post doom porn hikikomori?

Of course, but not Images.

[Voros]

To the OP.
Do you have any idea what you started?

The poem is good in format, but the idea is sickening.
My rating-6/10

[Tritnew]

Voros said:

but the idea is sickening.

The Idea Is GREAT.

[Voros]

SO, 129thVisplane... You are a female, right?
At least that's what I got reading the poem.
No offense.

[Voros]

Tritnew said:

The Idea Is GREAT.

I don't even want to know how... No wait, I do.

[RaphaelMode]

Voros said:

I don't even want to know how... No wait, I do.

One character in the RPG i develop says this exact line at one point. But it sounds awkward to me and I think I'm going to change it.

[Tritnew]

Voros said:

I don't even want to know how... No wait, I do.

Because I (sort of) enjoyed Impse and I like torturing myself with shitty and disgusting Fanfics, sometimes with my close friends too.

[129thVisplane]

I wanted to forget about this and pretend it never happened, but that's impossible now, I guess.

Jaxxoon R said:

If you regret it, why did you feel the need to share it?

Because I'm secretly proud of it, in a guilty sort of way.

Voros said:

SO, 129thVisplane... You are a female, right?
At least that's what I got reading the poem.
No offense.

Yep, I am. The poem is indeed written from a female's perspective, maybe I should've specified that beforehand.

[RaphaelMode]

The egregores panic that you are ascaping their grasp and so they try to make you feel guilty. This is also the case with almost every kokewad ever.

This poem as well as other examples of counterculture is EXTREMELY healthy.

[Tritnew]

I've wrote weird and disgusting shit before with my BF, but we don't regret It like you do because we got some laughs out of them.

Hell, Impse makes this look like art, so yea. Pretty sure there's shit worse than this on the Internet.

[Deleted_Account]

This poem should be receiving writing awards and get turned into a movie.

[Tritnew]

Piper Maru said:

This poem should be receiving writing awards and get turned into a movie.

Mancubus: The Eight Nipples

In theaters worldwide.

[RUSH]

Oh my, how did this beautiful art escape me for so long? I seem to be late to the party here but I would give this nothing less than 10 out of 10. A real classic. Legendary status. Five impses out of five.

[LittleInferno]

Obsidian said:

The Cacodemon
Is the most lovely Hellspawn
But sucks at blowjobs

Unless you are brave enough.