Guest Nuno Correia Posted May 13, 2001 Haiku is cool I thought it was hentai Seems I am a pervert 0 Share this post Link to post
Guest Nuno Correia Posted May 13, 2001 I seem to be troubled This maybe isn't haiku Deadnail? 0 Share this post Link to post
Guest Malachai Posted May 13, 2001 Hey, that's all right. It's an understandable mistake. (I) We forgive you. Really. ;) 0 Share this post Link to post
Ralphis Posted May 13, 2001 Nuno Correia said:I seem to be troubled This maybe isn't haiku Deadnail? a haiku is 5 sylables 7 sylables 5 sylables im pretty sure i spelled sylables wrong. 0 Share this post Link to post
Guest Nuno Correia Posted May 13, 2001 Now I'm getting it I just need some practice now I should play some Doom 0 Share this post Link to post
fodders Posted May 13, 2001 Ralphis said:a haiku is 5 sylables 7 sylables 5 sylables im pretty sure i spelled sylables wrong. 2 l's :) 0 Share this post Link to post
fodders Posted May 13, 2001 Nuno Correia said:I seem to be troubled This maybe isn't haiku Deadnail? Traditionally and ideally, a haiku presents a pair of contrasting images, one suggestive of time and place, the other a vivid but fleeting observation. Working together, they evoke mood and emotion. The poet does not comment on the connection but leaves the synthesis of the two images for the reader to perceive. 0 Share this post Link to post
deadnail Posted May 14, 2001 Nuno Correia said:I seem to be troubled This maybe isn't haiku Deadnail? How many damn times I hate my handle in caps Please stop doing it =) Anyway, yeah, what Fod said. 0 Share this post Link to post
Zeratul 982 Posted May 14, 2001 Nuno Correia said:Now I'm getting it I just need some practice now I should play some Doom Congratulations You're getting the hang of it Keep on practicing (I know I should) 0 Share this post Link to post
Guest pickle_hammer Posted May 14, 2001 You are a pervert Go download doomserv, pervert! Or else I'll kill you 0 Share this post Link to post
Disorder Posted May 14, 2001 Zeratul 982 said:Congratulations You're getting the hang of it Keep on practicing (I know I should) Ok, ok... My turn now. =) Too much coffee Too little sleep I hate dogs who bark at night Naaah.... I suck at Haiku 0 Share this post Link to post
Guest ZarcyB Posted May 14, 2001 Disorder, that's wrong You got the syllables wrong This one is correct However, at school, I did these ages ago And they sucked big time 0 Share this post Link to post
Lazer Posted May 14, 2001 Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom 0 Share this post Link to post
fodders Posted May 14, 2001 Lazer said:a haiku presents a pair of contrasting images Hardly applies there does it? :) 0 Share this post Link to post
Submerge Posted May 15, 2001 That is okay, man It happens to everyone We all make mistakes 0 Share this post Link to post
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